Wednesday 26 October 2011

Please forgive me ;(

Please forgive me if i cheat u.I know I am the one who start making problem in our relationship.Sorry for all the word that came out from my mouth that make your heart broke.I promise i will not do the same mistake again.Please forgive me..
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  1. Garfield30 October 2011 at 03:15

    Shamin,

    Kalau betul2 buat takleh guna "if i cheat u" tp kena guna "because i..."

    Who make problem kena tukar "who start making problems" sebab continuous tense..

    that came out from my mouth - leh tukar "that I speak"

    that make your heart broken -> that made your heart broke. sebab cam tak sesuai..

    will not do it <- tak perlu ltk "it"

    Cheers bro, same as Mustaqim, you only have to improve on Tenses(Past,Present,Continuous)

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  2. muhd.shamin31 October 2011 at 23:45

    thanks a lot faiz..

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